portfolio / showcase

[a_slosh]

what do you think of my portfolio?

http://www.arranschlosberg.cjb.net

[psychlonex]

I like it. A few things:
It needs some color!
i like the idea of the interactive backgrounds, add some more!
It seems to run really slow but my computer (mac g3 233mhz) isn't exactly the fastest.
You definitely need to add some examples of your work in the portfolio section.

Instead of popping it into a new window, why not just display it in the main window? it's not a full screen site, so I don't see why it needs it's own window.

Psx

[Romwin]

Looks good.  But it feels like it needs more content.  Took only about 2 minutes to go through it all

[Craig Hillelson]

I think it looks great. The Bruce Lee quotes are cool. My one criticism would be that a few of the audio loops become a little grating after only a few cycles. Maybe some more ethereal sounding stuff? Nice job.

[a_slosh]

thanks for your advice,

i am working on files so that i can put a whole heap in at a time, theres only a few now because it hasnt been up long

[the pale e]

Conceptually, it's a great design.  I think that the movements between the content are certainly cool.  Maybe a little much focus on the customization aspect.  Recomendations?  Some imagery would advance your cause, what's a picture worth again?  Add more personality to your txt content.  It came across as bland and uninspired.  Direct your visitor to your messages.  I mean, upon site launch, you should hit em hard with what you want them to be thinking.  Navigation is strong in this one.

HAve fun!

Hope this helps!

Thx,
the pale e

[a_slosh]

thanks pale e

im quite busy right now with school but i should have my new stuff up soon, my only problem is coming up with ideas for examples, i can make a lot of things once i have the idea but need some inspiration.  do you know any good sites for inspiration?

[BurtonRider1983]

DuDe...did you say you want some good sites?!?!....ok, check these ones for now...
They are both the same site just diff, version...totally different style.  Mad skills were put into there making.  I prefer the older version, it has style.  Oh, and about your site.....I like it.  You have some really cool features.  I like the interface and you sure know your action scripting....however, add some color, more eye candy, and put some more high energy or catchy music.  Great job.

http://www.clusta.com/clusta/    (older version, better)
http://www.clusta.com

it all takes a while to navigate around.....keep up the good work